By the next morning, various phrases had coalesced into the following:
Lost in thoughts of the
everyday kind,
I travel a vast and untamed
land,
Find hardscrabble purchase as
a hill I climb
And pause to rest at the
crest.
Before me are valleys I’ve
yet to explore
And sunlit mountains under
snow-white duvet.
Captured by splendor, I am
scarcely aware
My thoughts—and my breath—have
been stolen away.
I had mentioned to my friend that I found it difficult to write metaphorically, and not until I finished the poem and read it for the umpteenth time did I realize it could be a metaphor for life as a whole, and each line a metaphor for the various stages in life. My Muse works in strange ways.
Photo courtesy of Bob and Karol Libbey
Your Muse works in strange and delightful ways, I would say!
ReplyDeleteWHEW ! You simply amaze us .. Cap and Patti ..
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